Brave Susan

Once upon a time, there was a little girl called Susan. She was an ordinary child and she lived in a village. She went to school with other children by bus every day and had normal lessons and studied subjects like us.

At that time, the children spent their time going to school, doing homework and watching TV at home. None of them dared to play outside the house because there were two monsters who liked to eat children very much. No children could escape from them and the monsters were able to eat ten children in one mouthful. Fortunately, one monster was killed by her friend, Molly. But the another monster was stronger and it was harmful to the villagers.

One day, her mother asked her to give a present to her aunt who lived far away from the village. Susan knew that it would be very dangerous but she couldn't refuse, because this was an order! So after school, she carried her satchel and the present to give to her aunt. It was really a long way! She walked and walked until she arrived at the enterance of a cave. It was dark inside and she couldn't see anything. When she went in, she felt afraid and frightened. Suddenly, there was a sound " Ha ha! Little girl, you will be my supper, I am the strongest monster in the world!"

Susan knew that she met the giant monster and suddenly the cave became bright. She was able to see the monster. Its face was green, its nose and mouth were yellow. Also, its mouth was thousand times bigger than normal people. Of course, Susan was very frightened and she wanted to yell for help, but it was far from the village and nobody could hear her cry.

Susan also knew that she would be the monster's supper if she didn't do something. So, she tried to use her satchel to hit the monster but it was useless, then she try to hit the monsters with her textbooks. It was also useless. The monster laughed loudly and said" don't be silly, if you can use a satchel and few textbooks to defeat me. I couldn't be harmful to the villagers! Now it is my turn!" Then fire came out from its mouth and the present melted." Now, how can you defeat me? you will be my supper and this is a fact. Don't move and I will gobble you up in one mouthful."

The monster opened its emormous mouth and saliva gushing out. Susan suddenly remember the monster was afraid of sharp things so she took out the compass which she had used in the Maths lessons and used it to prick the monster leg. "Ouch! What's it..." " Ouch! Ouch! Ouch! Ouch!" Susan use the compass to prick heavily in every part of the monster body so blood came out. At last the monster fell down and Susan use the compass once again to prick the monster's heart savagely and plenty of blood seeped out. The cave was flooded with blood and she had to swim in order to escape from the cave. After she left the cave, it completely disappeared and she could still hear a loud noises"Ah! Ouch!!!!"

Everybody could hear the cries and came to the cave and found Susan. They knew the monster had already died and they were extremely happy, they clapped their hands for Susan and called Susan " Big Monster Defeater". Her parents gave her $150000 as a reward and the villagers also gave her presents. Her friend Molly said" You were very brave and smart to use a compass to defeat the giant monster!!

Now, Susan, she was not ordinary anymore. She was a real real hero!!