Dear Harry,
I am glad to receive your letter. You asked me what's my favourite TV programe. Now I will let you have my answer.
My favourite TV programe is Winnie The Pooh. I like watching it very much because the main character Winnie The Pooh is very fat but looks very cute. I think he is lovely and looks funny. I watch it three times a week.
In this TV programe, it talks about Winnie The Pooh and his friends who have many adventures like someone lost and they have to find them. Althought they have many argument and diffculties, they will think of many ways to stop arguing. This is my second reason why I like this TV programe!
This is an interesting and funny movie. If you like to watch it, I can bring it to you in the summer holiday!
Please write back soon!
Best regards,
Jerry Lo
Jun 27, 2008
A plan for Summer Holiday
Today is already the 28th June. There are only several days left to attend to school. Then there is a lovely and long Summer holiday comming soon. My Summer holiday starts on the 14th of July. This is my planning how to spend this long holiday. See the following list
On the 1st of July to 20th of July: finish my homework and go to the learning centre
On the 21st of July to 28th of July: go to France and Spain
On the 29th of July to 14th of August: finish my rest of my homework and play with my friends and go to the learning centre every day
On the 15th of August to 16th of August: visit my grandpa
On the 17th of August to 31st of August: check the homework that I haven't done and play with my friends ready for school
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This is my Summer holiday's timetable. I am looking forward to enjoying this holiday!
On the 1st of July to 20th of July: finish my homework and go to the learning centre
On the 21st of July to 28th of July: go to France and Spain
On the 29th of July to 14th of August: finish my rest of my homework and play with my friends and go to the learning centre every day
On the 15th of August to 16th of August: visit my grandpa
On the 17th of August to 31st of August: check the homework that I haven't done and play with my friends ready for school
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This is my Summer holiday's timetable. I am looking forward to enjoying this holiday!
Jun 20, 2008
Cannon, the kid
Once a upon a time, there was a small kid named Cannon and he was eight years old. He was not too tall but he was very fat. Everyone loved him very much and played with him all the time because he was fun. He always made silly jokes.
One day Ben, his friend asked Cannon how to do his homework. Cannon thought Ben should be able to finish by himself so he didn't answer him. Ben was very upset and went home immediately.
Half an hour later Harry asked Cannon to play a board game with him. Cannon said, "You are rubbish! I don't want to play such a silly game, bye!" Harry cried but Cannon went away without even looking at him.
One hour later another friend Mathew asked Cannon to play Chinese chess. But Cannon said" You go away. I don't know how to play, stupid!" Mathew cried.
The next day Cannon scolded all the students in his class and nobody would ever want to play with him anymore!
One day Ben, his friend asked Cannon how to do his homework. Cannon thought Ben should be able to finish by himself so he didn't answer him. Ben was very upset and went home immediately.
Half an hour later Harry asked Cannon to play a board game with him. Cannon said, "You are rubbish! I don't want to play such a silly game, bye!" Harry cried but Cannon went away without even looking at him.
One hour later another friend Mathew asked Cannon to play Chinese chess. But Cannon said" You go away. I don't know how to play, stupid!" Mathew cried.
The next day Cannon scolded all the students in his class and nobody would ever want to play with him anymore!
Jun 19, 2008
The Use of Adjective Words in Writing
Adventages
1. to describe things or people specifically
2. to help readers know the level of feelings and emotions of people
3. to hlep build the transitional stages of people lives
4. to describe people's characters so to add colours
P.S.
1.Don't use too many adjectives to describe things or people
2.You have to use the correct adjectives to describe things or people
3.You should use fewer adjectives in the work place
1. to describe things or people specifically
2. to help readers know the level of feelings and emotions of people
3. to hlep build the transitional stages of people lives
4. to describe people's characters so to add colours
P.S.
1.Don't use too many adjectives to describe things or people
2.You have to use the correct adjectives to describe things or people
3.You should use fewer adjectives in the work place
Writing a composition
Do you know how to write a composition? Do you think it is very difficult? I have some useful tips to be able to write a nice composition.
Firstly, you have to think what you want to write about.For example, you want to write diary, a letter or a topic that you are interested in. You may also want to report your experiences or write something else. When you have already thought what is the title of the compostition, you have to list some points that you want to include in the passage. After that you can write the passage with some beautiful adjectives and pharses so the passage will be a joy to read. Sometimes you have to care about the format of the writing, the spelling of the words and you have to check for some silly mistakes.
Here is a example of a short passage..
On the 17th June I attended a prefect camp at Sai Kung and there were about 160 other prefects who went there. We played many games in the hall and they were really exciting. At night we had a fun pillow fight.
The next day we also played some games in the hall until noon. After that we had lunch and went back to school at two o'clock. I had two very pleasent days.
Please write a story or diary to share with me. I am looking forward to reading your lovely and nice stories! Remember use more beautiful adjectives to describe the event.
Firstly, you have to think what you want to write about.For example, you want to write diary, a letter or a topic that you are interested in. You may also want to report your experiences or write something else. When you have already thought what is the title of the compostition, you have to list some points that you want to include in the passage. After that you can write the passage with some beautiful adjectives and pharses so the passage will be a joy to read. Sometimes you have to care about the format of the writing, the spelling of the words and you have to check for some silly mistakes.
Here is a example of a short passage..
At camp
On the 17th June I attended a prefect camp at Sai Kung and there were about 160 other prefects who went there. We played many games in the hall and they were really exciting. At night we had a fun pillow fight.
The next day we also played some games in the hall until noon. After that we had lunch and went back to school at two o'clock. I had two very pleasent days.
Please write a story or diary to share with me. I am looking forward to reading your lovely and nice stories! Remember use more beautiful adjectives to describe the event.
Jun 11, 2008
A Reply Letter
You recently receive a letter from your cousin, Sam living in Canada. He told you he would like to visit Hong Kong during the summer for a week. Write first to tell him your recent school activity. Tell him when you will start your school holiday. Then suggest him what to do during his stay in Hong Kong. End the letter with a good closing remark. This is an example.
12 th June 08
Dear Sam,
I was glad to receive your letter and I am very pleased to know you are going to come to visit us in Hong Kong.
This week I have an exam but I think it seems easy. Next week we have a badminton competition. I think I will win, you know I am good at playing badminton and I play it twice a week.
OK let me talk about what I would like to suggest what to do when you are in Hong Kong. On the first day, I think you should visit the museums in Tsim Sha Tsui. There are many interesting shows. In the Space Museum there are some latest movies about sky and space. You can also visit Historical Museum . Of course you can learn a lot about Hong Kong history there. Also you can eat in some fast food shops or restaurants there.
On the second and the third day you can go to the theme park Disneyland. You can stay there overnight. In Disneyland you can play games such as rollercoasters, shooting worriers etc. The food in Disneyland is really yummy but they are really expensive.
On the fourth day you can take a rest or go shopping. You can play computer games with me while you are bored.
On the fifth day you can do some exercises. Go to Ma On Shan for a bike riding for two hours and I think you will feel very hungry. After you have dinner, I can take you to the dessert house to have sweet dessert.
On the sixth day you must go to the Peak for a sight seeing. You will go there by trams. Trams are very famous old vehicles in Hong Kong. You will like the scene and you can take a lot of pictures there.
I will leave the last day for you to think about what you would like doing. Anyway, I hope you will have an unforgettable time in Hong Kong.
See you soon!
Best Wishes,
Jerry
"Air" Sound Poem
A little brown bear
Dare to live in a market fair.
Where he hears some hairy mares
Rarely shares their hair.
Dare to live in a market fair.
Where he hears some hairy mares
Rarely shares their hair.
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